Blog Blather
Friday, October 10, 2008
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It starts early
Wednesday I put up a piece about the Rea Award winner this year. The praise of the short-story was that it was dispassionately passionate. which seems strange praise for art, which is supposed to be passionately passionate.
Anyway, the article, "Has the Newbery Lost Its Way" is a sort of continuation of that theme.Read the whole article. It seems to point out where we are headed overall.
Book aficionados frequently used the words “odd,” “unusual,” or “unconventional” to describe the latest Newbery winners. It’s possible in an age of sequels that committee members have unintentionally gravitated toward quirky offerings. But valuing uniqueness over universality has often led judges down the wrong road. Case in point? A member of the 1953 Newbery committee, which chose The Secret of the Andes (Viking, 1952) over E. B. White’s masterpiece, Charlotte’s Web (Harper, 1952), confessed that she preferred the former because she hadn’t seen any good books about South America.
Take care--SK
Wednesday, October 08, 2008
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I Wonder
HowManyOfMe.com
How many have your name?
There are
8
Frederick Wentworths in the U.S.A.
I wonder if any of the Annes and Fredericks are married. That would be odd.
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What I Learned Wednesday
Look, but don't be touched:Amy Hempel has won the $30,000 Rea Award for the Short Story. The judges said: "Amy Hempel is one of our masters of the dire emotional state rendered with an offhandedness that, combined with tenderness, results in fiction that's at once dispassionate and compassionate."Yeah, because passionate compassion is just gauche and embarrassing. And too middle class.
We are becoming emotional voyeurs. We want to look but not have to actually be involved because then we can claim to understand but not live the daily grind of the consequences of a circumstance. It's a lot like, "I know a guy who has a cousin..."
As a writer I am dedicated to pulling you so far into the emotion and tension of a story that when you finally crawl out, you have to dust off your clothes. I don't want you to stand safely behind the glass and observe. I want you in the operating room, gloves on and your hands into the chest cavity as deep as you can go. Emotionally speaking.
If dispassion is the fashion, I'm in the wrong line of work.
Take care--Susan Kaye
Monday, October 06, 2008
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Currently Reading
None But You, (Frederick Wentworth, Captain: Book 1)
By Susan Kaye
see relatedOne step closer
The rewrites have been accepted. (I rewrote Chapters 2-6 of For You Alone--a 2nd time.) That means we are getting closer to being ready to go to press!
Take care--SK
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Currently Reading
Salt: A World History
By Mark Kurlansky
see relatedI clerihew, do you?
I am reading the book, Salt, A World History, by Mark Kurlansky. In it, it makes reference to Edmund Clerihew Bentley, a British crime novelist who lived from 1875 to 1956. He invented the poetic form of the clerihew. (And HERE.)
The general idea is to mention a person in the first line and then finish the short poem with something about them and their life or occupation. Here is one that G. K. Chesterton wrote about Jane Austen:The novels of Jane Austen
Are the ones to get lost in.
I wonder if Labby
Has read Northanger Abbey.`Labby' was a nickname of Henry Du Pré Labouchere (1831-1912), English journalist and radical, who delighted in attacking Queen Victoria (by the way, whether or not Labby had read Northanger Abbey, Victoria had).
While I am no poet, I have been inspired to try. Here is my attempt at clerihew themed a la Austen:Captain Wentworth, Frederick
An Austen hero, heroic.
His behavior so prideful and slack,
Nearly cost him getting Anne back.I told you I am no poet. But, it is an interesting form with which to play. So, write a clerihew. Write quite a few. Put your brain to the test. Post in responses your best.
Take care--SK
Thursday, October 02, 2008
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What I Learned Thursday
Yeah, I missed Wednesday--last Wednesday, and I missed this past Wednesday as well. I'm sorry. No excuses other than last week I was rewriting like crazy. Yesterday I was waiting.
Several years ago when I was writing strictly for an online audience, I was making art. It was me, the words and my imagination. Now that I am an author, writing novels for prints, I am something else all together.
I write and someone else looks over the story and makes suggestions. Sometimes the suggestions are based on business and what the buying public might like. Sometimes it's based on the story and what it needs to make it better. The two are not necessarily analogous.
Right now I'm waiting for the last eight chapters. I spoke with the editor and they didn't anticipate any problems with them. Meaning no rewriting. But, this was before they looked at the file from the reader. There may be lots-O-suggestions and that will leave me just a few days to rework things. Making art was so much simpler.
But I don't really want to go back.
My writing is better. I push myself more than I did when no one was looking over my shoulder all the time. There was a lot of freedom writing serialized fiction, but there was little growth for me as a writer. So, I trade freedom for skill.
I suppose, depending on when I get the next chapters and how much work they need, I may be able to add speed to the resume.
Take care--SK
Saturday, September 27, 2008
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Finally, my main skill proves useful!
Dr. Helen asks if sarcasm is a new crime fighting tool. (I am sarcastic to the extreme at times. Most times.)
She tells of a female bank robber who threatened to open fire fled when the equally female teller said, "Are you serious?"
I fully expect that this will be used as an example of how women need to be empowered. Perhaps the presence of male security personnel was too daunting. Proving that men mess up everything for women.
This also is a perfect example of how women undermine one another in their attempts to lift themselves out of the morass imposed upon them by the patriarchy. I'm sure there is a federally funded grant for aspiring female felons just begging to be organized.
I'm sure in a Women's Study course somewhere this will show how women are STILL being held back. Until there is equality in crime, there is NO equality.
SK
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A Housing Crisis of Another Kind
Quotes like this have been showing up in newspapers and blogs everywhere lately:
The company has recently seen shares fall from £6.20 to £1.55.An insider at the company told the Daily Star that bosses had been aware of the worsening situation for "a while".
News of stock prices tanking and sources saying that those in power knew and fiddled while Rome burned so to speak is getting to be old hat. Or ears.Tycoon Hugh Hefner has been advised to cut back on staff at his multi-million dollar glamour empire as it struggles to cope during the global economic turmoil.
Yes, poor Hef is facing a housing crisis of his own. My assumption is that free porn on the Web is undercutting sales of that fine journalistic endeavour, Playboy. Who wants to be troubled by those pesky articles when people all over the world are willing to let you peek under their covers for free?
But, since Hugh Hefner is an American icon, albeit a degraded and debauched one, I propose a Bunny Bailout. This can be shoehorned into the 700 billion dollar boondoggle emergency package being negotiated right now.
I hope it's not too late. I can't imagine what will happen to all those girls whose only skill is walking on 5 inch stilettos!
Proudly pay those taxes!
SK
Monday, September 22, 2008
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I Quit
I'm counting in decades now how long it has been since I regularly watched network news. Walter Cronkite was still at it. I know he retired a few years ago.
Anyway, my local news is about to join the ranks.
All totaled we have 2 hours in the early morning before the national morning shows. 1/2 hour at noon. 1 1/2 hours in the evening and 1/2 at night. that's 4 1/2 hours of news and the still can't figure out if they are genuinely news, or entertainment.
Example: The obligatory consumer reports. Last night was scam night. Telling all about a scam that is plaguing the area and how harmful it is to the senior citizens it targets. You would think a news show would be concerned with getting all the news into the hands of the viewing public as soon as possible. You would be wrong. The smiling reporter during the sign-off informed viewers that if they wanted to know how to tell if they were being scammed, they would have the rest of the story at 11PM.
Is this a news story or is it a continuing saga much like the nighttime soaps? Pick one people!
I am also sick to death of having the same story cycle through all those hours of news several times. Same voice over reading--badly--the same copy, same badly cut video, same blasted story. I know news is cheap to produce, and heaven only knows that most of what actually labels itself as entertainment is not, but really, get a clue and at least vary the copy so that I don't go into a coma.
And, try doing some in-depth reporting instead of grabbing off the wire services yet another baby ducks/kitten/puppies down the storm drain in Ohio. I have seen more stories about trucks loaded with jelly, ice cream, chocolate sauce or other gooey food products to give me diabetes. Do I care that traffic was tied up for hours in Duluth because of a wreck? Not really. But, it's cheap and it takes up time, several times.
Time I don't have anymore. I'm getting older and that means cutting out things that are bad for me. Like the local news. It is killing my brain cells. It's inanity is raising my blood pressure. Instead of watching the patented friendly banter of these people I think I'll go back to crocheting.
Take care--Susan Kaye
Wednesday, September 17, 2008
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What I Learned Wednesday
So, I've gotten word from my editor. We've come to an agreement. The character I removed in five of the first six chapters will be returned unharmed. Changed somewhat, but no damage done. But, this means I have to combine the first version of the novel and the second rewrite. Cutting and pasting and reweaving.
The interesting thing is when I decided to remove the character in the first place, I had to get used to the idea. And now that I'm putting them back, it's the same thing. I told my husband that is feels a lot like when our daughter came back home to live. She hadn't been gone long but we'd grown accustomed to having the house to ourselves. All the other characters have been going through their paces without the character. I wonder if they have to adjust as well?
Bill called it "setting a mental plate at the table." I think that's clever.
He's okay by the way. His symptoms are just the hereditary osteoarthritis exerting itself. The physicians assistant said he's got old bones, which is an alternative riff on his saying Bill had old pipes. They don't do much in the medical field to teach tact and deportment, do they?
Oh, for those of you who are bothered by the bright yellow background, sorry. I need something brilliant to get this old brain into rewrite mode. Don't worry, it won't last long. My short attention span guarantees that!
Have a good one
SK
Thursday, September 11, 2008
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Well, things are somewhat back to normal
I've been very fortunate that all my time online, I've never had a major meltdown when it came to my website or blog. Until that last little bit of apocalyptic nightmare.
Okay, that was a bit strong. Thanks to Dan, aka finite-empathy, I am back up and putting things right.
Now I know what to do if a Xanga blog goes south--take it down to the ground and start over!
Does that make me sound like I had to reweave all the pixels by hand? I didn't.
Anyway, I'll be back in a while to play with it. My hubsband has to go to the doc and have his right hip checked out. They replace hips in 50-year-olds don't they? Oh boy.
Take care--Susan Kaye
Wednesday, September 10, 2008
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Sorry about the mess
There's a man coming to look at the problem.
Take care--SK
Tuesday, September 09, 2008
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Currently Listening
Relaxation and Meditation with Music and Nature: Ocean Voyages
By Various Artists
see relatedThank you all
Thank you, lilycat1, Bethmi, Kathy, Amy and jediwing for your responses about Anne and Frederick.
When I started writing A Word, A Look, #3 in the Frederick Wentworth series, I though to take them five years out after their wedding. I'm thinking that would be a big mistake. I see now that a great deal of their marriage is going to be established in the first few months and so that is where I need to start.
So, Chapter One, as of today, will begin as they are coming into Bath and heading for their first meeting with Sir Walter as man and wife. The scene I have in mind will point up their basic differences right away.
I had already written some scenes at sea that I an rearrange--thank the Lord for cut-n-paste.
Today will be writing several pages of the opening chapter and then a brief synopsis for my publisher. Too bad I have no idea where to go after the first chapter.
Hey! I'm a writer. They could go practically anywhere.
Thanks again those of you who posted. Any other insights are very much welcome.
Take care--Susan Kaye
Friday, September 05, 2008
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Your mission, should you decide
to accept it, it tell me what Frederick Wentworth sees in Anne Elliot.
Jane Austen tells us that Frederick and Anne love one another. Though, after reading this from early in Chapter Four: "Half the sum of attraction, on either side, might have been enough, for he had nothing to do and she had hardly any body to love:..." makes me wonder how much of their attraction was a combo of boredom and desperation. Had they gotten married, would they have been happy? Or, does the separation actually work to their benefit by forcing them to grow through the pain and mature into better people?
And, once the challenge of getting back together is over, what do they see in one another?
To be honest, I think FW is always going to be smart and funny and rather a pistol even as he grows older. My grandfather was like this. Anne, on the other hand ... I am at a loss.
I thought I was getting a handle on her in the end of For You Alone. I think I've lost that and I guess I am loath go go and read my own work.
So, what say you? Anne and Frederick. Why are they together?
Take care--Susan Kaye
Wednesday, September 03, 2008
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Currently Listening
Eagles - Their Greatest Hits 1971-1975
By Eagles
see relatedWhat I Learned Wednesday
What I've learned this week is that no matter how much you think you're not thinking about some, you're thinking about it!
Aside from a last read through, I have sent off all the edits I had. I don't expect much in the next eight chapters other than a little polishing here and there. (Okay, I've probably just jinxed myself for sure!) That being finished I can let down for the day. And I feel it. That good, I got something accomplished tired you feel after mowing the lawn or cleaning closets.
So, I am off to watch a movie--not sure which one--and wait for the next batch of edits. My hope is, by the end of the week it will all be out of my hands and For You Alone will be moving inextricably towards the printer!
Take care--Susan Kaye
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